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Post by Amour Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:02 am



The Bones in the Classroom



WARNING!

This story, has people that are pregnant, refrence'es to certian romatic things. There will be some sentance's that are...thinking of the word to discirbe this...
I could say crud. But I don't think that they are that bad.
And I might cut some sentences out.
I am WARNING you, that there will be some thing's that you may not like.
This is a case about children that are murdered.
There might be some dicey descriptons. But I will try and tone it down.
This is a WARNING though.
So if you don't like the fact that there might be some things that you don't like.
THEN DON'T READ IT!
Thank you very much.

I would like to know your opinon of my story and you can comment on it if you choose to.
But if you do comment I would like you to remember the rulse and keep it nice if you don't like it.
Nice.

I hope you enjoy the following story.

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Enjoy!!



Chapter One:


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Chapter Two

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Post by Amour Wed Feb 23, 2011 2:46 am

Okay...so what do you guys think? Please leave a comment and tell me what you think and what I can work on to do better...
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Post by Love Fri Feb 25, 2011 2:44 pm

I do not watch Bones, sadly, but I still like the story. Very Happy
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Post by Love Fri Feb 25, 2011 2:47 pm

Oh, you've probably seen the, "Look Away, Kids!" section, and I'll be making story categories soon, I can move this to the story thread version of that if you'd like.
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Post by Amour Fri Feb 25, 2011 4:02 pm

Yes please! And thank you for your comment...Very Happy
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